Learning how to write proper comments

I learned how to write a quality comment. I have made a comment about a Tamaki college film. It was kind of hard because we weren't allowed to use certain words for example, like, love and good. Some words we did use were admire, enjoyed and hilarious. We also wrote things that the film reminded us of.

The first second and third winners

Guess who came first? Of course Fakaola and then it was Tristan from the year 5 students. Then from the year 4 students from room 9 it was Limiteti. After cross-country I felt happy because when we were training we tried our best and we finished it.                                                              

My favourite animal

I learned how to make a cinquain poem at school. My one is about tigers because they are my favorite animals. They are endangered animals because they are hunted for their beautiful fur.

Going to the zoo

We learned that hippopotamus' have large teeth to scare other animals. Also their smelly and they are one of the fastest animals I have ever seen.

Elephants are big and fat but they don't smell.

My superhero boots

You should buy my shoes because they can fly like Super girl and run fast like The Flash. These shoes have three buttons. One is to make you invisible two is your dress up button and last of all the button that makes your shoes transform into anything like rocket boots.These shoes  will make you feel like a real superhero. If you want to buy my shoes you have to call 021008234.

ANZAC poem

This is an ANZAC poem I made. It is an acrostic poem which is a poem where I use one word like ANZAC and describe anzac using each of the letters. Here is my poem I wrote.

Information we share

We  have been learning how to create a positive digital footprint by exploring other school blogs to get information about what they are learning and what and what they are sharing.